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Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Spoken Word


When the clouds get heavy
I'll go outside and wash you
Away.
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Inspired by someone i consider a friend :]

full title "Outside the water pelts the windows, while inside i stay at bay."

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=PaperBoatDreams Oct 25, 2009, 3:05:07 PM
lol ;] thank you for the inspiration. i made a few dozen.. this is the only one i liked :[

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If only, if only the woodpecker cries,
The Bark on the trees was as soft as the skies.
The wolf waits below, hungry and lonely,
And howls to the moon, if only, if only.
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~zLustre Oct 25, 2009, 11:30:08 PM
haha, i didn't do much. :aww:
and i do that too. :oops: write a dozen and only like a few.

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~AurayaTheWhite Oct 30, 2009, 6:56:54 PM
i love the simplicity. sometimes fewer words seem to speak so much more deeply...

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Can we pretend I'm amazing? Instead of what we both know...

Close your eyes, for your eyes will only tell the truth, and the truth isn't what you want to see. In the dark it is easy to pretend, that the truth is what it ought to be <333
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=PaperBoatDreams Oct 30, 2009, 8:26:05 PM
Hemingway said "All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know." and at the time. this was it.

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If only, if only the woodpecker cries,
The Bark on the trees was as soft as the skies.
The wolf waits below, hungry and lonely,
And howls to the moon, if only, if only.
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~AurayaTheWhite Oct 30, 2009, 8:32:36 PM
i see...cool :P

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Can we pretend I'm amazing? Instead of what we both know...

Close your eyes, for your eyes will only tell the truth, and the truth isn't what you want to see. In the dark it is easy to pretend, that the truth is what it ought to be <333
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=julietcaesar Nov 22, 2009, 5:05:51 PM
It is quite amazing how so few words can engender so much meaning at the same time, when carefully chosen and placed against each other. I like your use of imagery here; it connects very well with what you are trying to express. :)

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